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Nonnavlis

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I'd be happy to look it over for you. I'm not much good on the grammar side of things, but I'm decidedly simpleminded so I'm pretty good for the "Does this make sense?" side of things ;P. MG Fantasy is my favourite genre, too.
 

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A car flies off into the sky. I would call it high fantasy.

You should come here to the forums with a willing attitude to learn, TC. If you don't know the distinction between high and low fantasy--and Harry Potter is most certainly *not* high fantasy--then learn what the two are and use the labels accordingly.
 
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