View Full Version : Seeking mail-order bride wisdom

03-15-2014, 09:16 PM
The good news is, I've had my new mail-order bride novel (62,000 words) read by a friend and she says it's good to go. The bad news is, this same friend liked my only other mail-order bride tale, a novella, and some readers hated that story. I disappointed them. My friend, Krista, was surprised by the response but she doesn't usually read romance.

I'm not seeking an editor or a proof-reader; the book has gone through three drafts and I feel pretty good in that regard. I'm in need of someone who loves romance to read my pages and tell me where I've gone wrong -- or if I've gone wrong, at all.

If you're interested, please send a PM.