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JessH
03-11-2014, 04:18 AM
I'm looking for folks willing to read the first three chapters of a New Adult ms. 40-ish pages. As with my other thread, if anyone wants to continue reading, that is more than welcome. Thanks! PM me if interested.

Lauram6123
03-11-2014, 05:24 AM
Are you looking for a line by line? General comments about characters and plot? What's it about?

JessH
03-15-2014, 07:57 PM
More general than line by line.

Twenty-something young woman graduates college, and rewards herself w/ a trip to Europe. Dad disapproves, but she's tired of staying w/in the lines. He pressures her to take a job offer she declined, even though she's got a job waiting when she returns. Starts relationship w/ the British tour guide. Gets promoted to London office. Relationship w/ dad devolves when dad finds out via social network. Dad digs into bf's history, basically trying to get her to break up with him.

JessH
03-23-2014, 08:28 PM
No interest? . . . :(

Unimportant
03-24-2014, 04:27 AM
There are some suggestions in the sticky threads here (http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=14331) and here (http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=133279) (and the ought-to-be-stickied thread here (http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=212171)) for things you can put in your beta-request post to entice readers. Hope that helps!