I'm looking for folks willing to read the first three chapters of a New Adult ms. 40-ish pages. As with my other thread, if anyone wants to continue reading, that is more than welcome. Thanks! PM me if interested.
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Twenty-something young woman graduates college, and rewards herself w/ a trip to Europe. Dad disapproves, but she's tired of staying w/in the lines. He pressures her to take a job offer she declined, even though she's got a job waiting when she returns. Starts relationship w/ the British tour guide. Gets promoted to London office. Relationship w/ dad devolves when dad finds out via social network. Dad digs into bf's history, basically trying to get her to break up with him.
Twenty-something young woman graduates college, and rewards herself w/ a trip to Europe. Dad disapproves, but she's tired of staying w/in the lines. He pressures her to take a job offer she declined, even though she's got a job waiting when she returns. Starts relationship w/ the British tour guide. Gets promoted to London office. Relationship w/ dad devolves when dad finds out via social network. Dad digs into bf's history, basically trying to get her to break up with him.
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