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cnl790
03-03-2014, 10:36 PM
A few weeks ago I finished my story that is themed around pants. It's 6,014 words and has a rather dark aura about it.

My title is still in the works as well, as the only one that is coming to mind is rather long.

I need mostly punctuation looked at, as I still have problems placing commas in appropriate places, or not placing them at all. Me and commas are not friends at all. There are probably some other errors that I haven't caught myself.

Thanks :)

Ramshackle
03-03-2014, 10:53 PM
I'm fully booked beta-wise so can't offer, but I'm utterly mesmerised by the thread title. :Wha:

Super curious here now. Hopefully others will be too. Good luck finding a beta.

cnl790
03-04-2014, 01:29 AM
I'm fully booked beta-wise so can't offer, but I'm utterly mesmerised by the thread title. :Wha:

Super curious here now. Hopefully others will be too. Good luck finding a beta.

It is an interesting story to say the least. The other one I'm still working on has hopes to be just as interesting as this one.

Shelley-Bell
03-05-2014, 02:39 AM
Good Evening
I am just finishing a first chapter for someone then I have some free beta time, I am new to this forum and beta reading but am happy to give it my best shot :)
Give me a shout or PM if this is any help to you ?
Cheers
Shelley