Hey guys. I need some beta readers for the first chapter of my new-adult contemporary novel.
The story is about a young man leaving his hometown to travel around in search of an adventure. It ends up being a love story, but the opening chapter is mostly about him making the decision to leave. I've had it beta read quite a few times already, and I'm getting drastically mixed reviews on it. Some say it's awesome, others say that they lose interest and don't see any reason to root for my MC.
So, I figure getting a few more people to read it might help. I'm rewriting it now and should have another version ready in a day or two, so if you're willing, please let me know and I'll PM you.
I'm very willing to read some of your first chapters in exchange. In fact, I'd really like to, because openings are the biggest thing I'm struggling with right now and critiquing helps me learn.
The story is about a young man leaving his hometown to travel around in search of an adventure. It ends up being a love story, but the opening chapter is mostly about him making the decision to leave. I've had it beta read quite a few times already, and I'm getting drastically mixed reviews on it. Some say it's awesome, others say that they lose interest and don't see any reason to root for my MC.
So, I figure getting a few more people to read it might help. I'm rewriting it now and should have another version ready in a day or two, so if you're willing, please let me know and I'll PM you.
I'm very willing to read some of your first chapters in exchange. In fact, I'd really like to, because openings are the biggest thing I'm struggling with right now and critiquing helps me learn.