I presently looking for a beta reader for a YA Science Fiction. I put in social sf, just because I'm still unsure what sort of SF it is. It is presently at 2,508 words. Ideally I'd like a turn around in a month (though before would be great), and is presently in the 6th draft.
It's primarily about a teen who has recently experienced a break up, and joins a group of geeks to explore the depths of an organic alternative to virtual reality in it's early stages.
I'm primarily looking for comments on character, clarity, and if its needed possibly world building.
It's primarily about a teen who has recently experienced a break up, and joins a group of geeks to explore the depths of an organic alternative to virtual reality in it's early stages.
I'm primarily looking for comments on character, clarity, and if its needed possibly world building.
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