I recently finished my first manuscript and I'm in need of a beta (preferably a mentor) to help me. I've made extensive revisions trying to make sure everything flows well and that all questions are answered. Now, I need a pair of fresh eyes to look it over and help me correct anything that seems out of place, whether it be with grammar, plot, or scientific inaccuracies.
I take criticism very well and will listen to anything that can help me make this as professional as possible. I want this story to be as great on paper as it is in my head.
Here's the hook for the story:
When characters from his favorite video game use his television as a portal to the real world, robotics engineer Daniel Petersen expected a technological apocalypse, not a technological romance.
As it stands now, the novel is 100,000 words.
Thanks in advance to anyone willing to help!
I take criticism very well and will listen to anything that can help me make this as professional as possible. I want this story to be as great on paper as it is in my head.
Here's the hook for the story:
When characters from his favorite video game use his television as a portal to the real world, robotics engineer Daniel Petersen expected a technological apocalypse, not a technological romance.
As it stands now, the novel is 100,000 words.
Thanks in advance to anyone willing to help!