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Angyl78
01-09-2014, 09:34 AM
Hello-
I am seeking a beta reader, last minute (submission date is the 1st of Feb.) It is a short story m/m genre, barely r-rated sex scenes.

I am looking for a line by line critique or at least a "yes I would by this" or "no I would not."

I posted the first 920 words in the SYW (http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?p=8637381#post8637381) forum.

Please pm on this message. I will check nightly.

Thank you,
Jenny

c.m.n.
01-09-2014, 06:40 PM
Hello,

I took a look at your SYW sample and made a comment there. Can I ask how long your story is going to be?

Angyl78
01-11-2014, 09:51 AM
It is under 8,000 words. I seem to waiver between 7,500 and 8,000.

Angyl78
01-21-2014, 10:08 AM
Hello,

I took a look at your SYW sample and made a comment there. Can I ask how long your story is going to be?

Thank you for the great critique, I learned quite a bit and was reminded of things I had forgotten. Thank you, again.