Hi everyone! I’m seeking betas for my 52k YA contemporary. I’m open to all critique, from general impressions to nitpicks. I am thick-skinned and I support honesty! This is kind of an offbeat project, so I'm curious to see what people think.
I love beta reading and am happy to swap. I have previous beta-ing experience and have also done a few reader reports for a small press, so hopefully my opinions will be helpful. I’m also a big fan of YA fantasy and science fiction as well, so as long as you like this type of contemporary (and your story is not 150k or something ridic) that can work splendidly!
Here’s my (very) rough query:
Although not apparent from the query, there is a secondary romance plot line that’s between two girls, if that’s either a turn-off or a draw. Please let me know through PM/posting here if you are interested! I’m a believer in swapping the first 2-3 chapters first.
I love beta reading and am happy to swap. I have previous beta-ing experience and have also done a few reader reports for a small press, so hopefully my opinions will be helpful. I’m also a big fan of YA fantasy and science fiction as well, so as long as you like this type of contemporary (and your story is not 150k or something ridic) that can work splendidly!
Here’s my (very) rough query:
Fifteen-year-old Zoe’s family needs money, and unfortunately for all of them, she’s the only one who can get it. Her mom’s a deadbeat and her older sister is fresh out of a bad accident that left her paralyzed and unemployed. Zoe’s determined, but not even old enough for a real job. Her only skill sets are being socially awkward and getting near-perfect scores on the CPT, the country’s standardized college admissions exam.
Then, almost as if they’ve been stalking her (they have), Zoe gets an invitation from a secret group of overachieving students known as The Impersonators. They hire themselves out to take the CPT for desperate Ivy League hopefuls, and they make big money doing it. They invite Zoe on an ill-advised trip across the country, where they’ll each impersonate dozens of students using sophisticated methods like fake IDs, disguises, and, when the situation calls for it, drag.
It’s this or foster care. And it turns out to be weirdly fun. Zoe’s never had friends, let alone a group of friends who make her enough money to pay her sister’s hospital bills twice over. Okay, it’s not right, and the slightest slip-up could ruin whatever college hopes she has left and probably her whole life. But what happened to her sister wasn’t right either. Pretty much everything that’s ever happened to her family hasn’t been right.
Maybe you do have to cheat to win.
Although not apparent from the query, there is a secondary romance plot line that’s between two girls, if that’s either a turn-off or a draw. Please let me know through PM/posting here if you are interested! I’m a believer in swapping the first 2-3 chapters first.