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I need Beta Readers who will provide feedback for a Sci-fi Fantasy Middle Grade Novel. Think The Hunger Games meets Percy Jackson. (86.6K Words / 294 pages / PG-10: Action, Violence, Light Romance, Implied Language)
Summary: In the future the world is divided. All communications have been severed: no telephones, Internet, or anything to send information. Now with the world in the midst of their fourth war in eighty years, the warring powers decide to send children on the dangerous mission to take messages back and forth to the battlefield. Adrian Zeno is such a child, brought in from the Outlands and placed on the front lines of a war that will be won or lost based on the information he carries.
While this is my first novel, I’ve successfully sold two independent feature films, and I’m currently working on a short film for this book project. A detailed critique is not necessary, but I really need honest feedback on the story and the characters. I do have a small questionnaire, for those who don’t want to worry with a write up. But I’m open even to “hey I liked it” “hey I didn’t”. Although the more information I have the better.
The first four chapters are available online right now. So, you can preview the work. If you want more just contact me, and I’ll send you over a full version. (Right now I have word and pdf. I’ll try to see if I can get a MOBI)
You’ll find the preview on one of the links below. If you can’t get to the preview email me and I’ll send it to you.
http://josephlstovall.blogspot.com/
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_Hqpn5D37nBTkJELWhiMTlaNFE/edit?usp=sharing
Thanks
jlstovall4 at yahoo.com
Summary: In the future the world is divided. All communications have been severed: no telephones, Internet, or anything to send information. Now with the world in the midst of their fourth war in eighty years, the warring powers decide to send children on the dangerous mission to take messages back and forth to the battlefield. Adrian Zeno is such a child, brought in from the Outlands and placed on the front lines of a war that will be won or lost based on the information he carries.
While this is my first novel, I’ve successfully sold two independent feature films, and I’m currently working on a short film for this book project. A detailed critique is not necessary, but I really need honest feedback on the story and the characters. I do have a small questionnaire, for those who don’t want to worry with a write up. But I’m open even to “hey I liked it” “hey I didn’t”. Although the more information I have the better.
The first four chapters are available online right now. So, you can preview the work. If you want more just contact me, and I’ll send you over a full version. (Right now I have word and pdf. I’ll try to see if I can get a MOBI)
You’ll find the preview on one of the links below. If you can’t get to the preview email me and I’ll send it to you.
http://josephlstovall.blogspot.com/
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_Hqpn5D37nBTkJELWhiMTlaNFE/edit?usp=sharing
Thanks
jlstovall4 at yahoo.com
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