View Full Version : Beta wanted - fantasy/ magic-realist WIP, 20k words

09-14-2013, 09:01 PM
I don't need an in-depth critique for this since it's a WIP, just looking for someone (or a couple of people) to read it over and tell me if they think it's worth carrying on with, needs more work, general thoughts etc.

It's only 20,000 words so shouldn't take too long to read, and I don't mind if you get bored and quit. I'd appreciate a quick note telling me where/ why you lost interest, if possible.

I've had a close friend read it already and despite all my begging for brutal honesty he refuses to criticise it - so I really, really need someone who's prepared to give it to me straight!

Reply/ PM me if you think you could help out, and we can sort something out. Thanks!

09-15-2013, 01:04 PM
I've sent you a PM

09-15-2013, 01:28 PM
Aurelia, could you tell us something about it?