I am working on Star Wars fan fiction where a plot point is a Mandalorian warrior, who tried to settle in the New Republic paints his armor Gold for the color of vengeance. He seeks vengeance because of the rape of his beloved (a naval officer) she wanted to report her accuser, a fellow officer but he killed herby making her death appear an accident.
My MC, a war weary sort, and an expert in explosives, dons his armor to seek his revenge. His first victims are the lawyer of the accused and the accused rapist himself.
After abducting the pair (the lawyer having been wounded both his legs being amputated by an explosion) the Mandalorian avenger takes them to his safe house to dispose of them
I plan for the accused to wake, strapped to a bed, looking at a mirror, nude and hearing the screaming of his lawyer who is being eaten alive by a Nexu (basically a jungle cat on steroids creature the Mandalorian tamed as a beloved pet and home protector). The next thing he sees the gold uniformed Mandalorian approaching and recounting the officer's name and rank and mentioning in formally legal terms he stands accused and convicted of the Mandalorian's beloved's rape and death afterward. And icily he adds, "Your sentence is death...your counselor's pain is nothing compared to the pain you will feel..."
And this time the guy s uninjured, but restrained, the Mandalorian had taken pains to knock him out with a paralytic agent that is wearing off.
"Let us see how the counselor is doing while the paralytic wears off..." He would say and then he turns on a monitor where the lawyer is being eaten alive by the Nexu.
He then unrolls his bag of instruments for the officer's imminent demise and starts to show them and describe each blade, in a seemingly academic tone, not expressing his rage but seeming to be a professor delivering a lecture.
He would probably start with the man's eyelids, removing them so he can see everything the Mandalorian intends to do. The man unmasks and states his name and says he is the fiancé of the woman he raped, and that the officer is looking at his death.
Basically my MC would keep this fellow alive for as long as possible, cauterizing amputations for example with a hot brand saying, in an almost genteel host of party voice, "I can't have you bleed out now can I?"
I'm curious as to how psychologically terrifying this might be to the naval officer the Mandalorian is torturing to death, all the steps he sees his executioner taking (my MC does everything in a precise and unhurried way)?
Also I'm curious about psychological repercussions for the Mandalorian? I intend to make him a more than one dimensional character, he remembers the woman he loves and hates her murderer but recognizes the monster he turns into taking his vengeance. But in some perverse manner he takes a sort of catharsis in his adversary's screams and inane babble.
I had him written as a warrior and an engineer by trade, but also with a capacity to love deeply. But when his love is lost he looses vengeance upon her attackers...
My MC, a war weary sort, and an expert in explosives, dons his armor to seek his revenge. His first victims are the lawyer of the accused and the accused rapist himself.
After abducting the pair (the lawyer having been wounded both his legs being amputated by an explosion) the Mandalorian avenger takes them to his safe house to dispose of them
I plan for the accused to wake, strapped to a bed, looking at a mirror, nude and hearing the screaming of his lawyer who is being eaten alive by a Nexu (basically a jungle cat on steroids creature the Mandalorian tamed as a beloved pet and home protector). The next thing he sees the gold uniformed Mandalorian approaching and recounting the officer's name and rank and mentioning in formally legal terms he stands accused and convicted of the Mandalorian's beloved's rape and death afterward. And icily he adds, "Your sentence is death...your counselor's pain is nothing compared to the pain you will feel..."
And this time the guy s uninjured, but restrained, the Mandalorian had taken pains to knock him out with a paralytic agent that is wearing off.
"Let us see how the counselor is doing while the paralytic wears off..." He would say and then he turns on a monitor where the lawyer is being eaten alive by the Nexu.
He then unrolls his bag of instruments for the officer's imminent demise and starts to show them and describe each blade, in a seemingly academic tone, not expressing his rage but seeming to be a professor delivering a lecture.
He would probably start with the man's eyelids, removing them so he can see everything the Mandalorian intends to do. The man unmasks and states his name and says he is the fiancé of the woman he raped, and that the officer is looking at his death.
Basically my MC would keep this fellow alive for as long as possible, cauterizing amputations for example with a hot brand saying, in an almost genteel host of party voice, "I can't have you bleed out now can I?"
I'm curious as to how psychologically terrifying this might be to the naval officer the Mandalorian is torturing to death, all the steps he sees his executioner taking (my MC does everything in a precise and unhurried way)?
Also I'm curious about psychological repercussions for the Mandalorian? I intend to make him a more than one dimensional character, he remembers the woman he loves and hates her murderer but recognizes the monster he turns into taking his vengeance. But in some perverse manner he takes a sort of catharsis in his adversary's screams and inane babble.
I had him written as a warrior and an engineer by trade, but also with a capacity to love deeply. But when his love is lost he looses vengeance upon her attackers...
