Hi.
I'm looking for beta readers to help with the plot and character part of this stage of revisions, but if you're good at line edits, let me know and I'll keep you in mind for the next stage. It's only 21.6K, so it shouldn't take TOO long to read, haha.
Here's my query letter:
Thank you in advance!
I'm looking for beta readers to help with the plot and character part of this stage of revisions, but if you're good at line edits, let me know and I'll keep you in mind for the next stage. It's only 21.6K, so it shouldn't take TOO long to read, haha.
Here's my query letter:
Dear Agent,
Fifteen year old Nicky Valentine may have a really romantic last name, but when it comes to girls, he’s totally useless.
So how the hell is he related to Cupid?
He’s never had any luck with his crush, Charlotte Starr, despite anything and everything that he’s done to try and impress her – all that happens is shit that ends in embarrassment and shame. It doesn’t help that she’s incredibly popular and has a boyfriend.
So imagine his shock when Cupid turns up on the eve of his sixteenth birthday and declares he’s his dad. Pretty sure that Cupid is just a crazy ass middle aged man, he doesn’t believe him. But then Cupid says that his powers will activate at midnight and Nicky starts to wonder if he might be able to get Charlotte’s attention at last.
His powers are activated, but then it turns out that being the son of Cupid with awesome powers is harder than being the son of Cupid without any. Especially when it looks like things are going to go horribly wrong.
STUPID CUPID is a YA Romantic Comedy.
Thank you for reading this,
Sincerely,
Me
Thank you in advance!