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Looking for beta reader (screenplay, crime)

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The305itself

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It has a lot to do with drugs, it has language, and I described a few sex scenes. I want it to be ready to query to agencies, so please blast away and reveal everything wrong with it, plot holes, grammar, dialogue, whatever you see wrong. In other words, brutal critiquing allowed, Thanks.

I have posted the first 10 pages on the SYW and I tried my best to apply all of the critiques given to the whole thing.
 
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Ok I am interested . I am an Indian writer if it is ok with you
for me no problem
 
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