View Full Version : Me, a Flasher?

05-17-2013, 06:50 PM
As a natural-born long-writer, I've been working for a while to learn the short forms. Not long ago, I took the daring leap into (gasp!) flash fiction. For me, this is the equivalent of an elephant high-diving into a tea-cup -- could anything good come of it, for the elephant or the cup? I was kind of worried about the audience, too.

Came in at 280 words. And then I edited that behemoth down to 260!


The result is here:


05-17-2013, 08:39 PM
Tight and poetic. I enjoyed it.

Siri Kirpal
05-17-2013, 11:59 PM
Sat Nam! (literally "Truth Name"--a Sikh greeting)

Good work! No damage to the elephant or the cup that I could see.


Siri Kirpal