View Full Version : Alpha reader wanted for ya fantasy 60 000 words

05-01-2013, 07:08 AM
Hi guys

I've finished a 60 000 draft of a ya fantasy. I have been workshopping it here, in a writing group and with my university but what I really need is someone who can read it from beginning to end and point out character arc flaws or plot flaws.

I don't need spelling or grammar or anything so detailed but just a fresh mind on whether the story is 'working'.

I don't really want someone to tell me the answers, just point out the spots where they can see issues or problems or it doesn't make sense etc.

Happy to return the favor and Alpha read your work in return.