Hi! I'm looking for a beta for a 1500 word MG short. I'm getting ready to sub it pretty soon so I would love another set of eyes. I would be grateful for any feedback you are willing to give from premise to grammar. I have rhino skin so no need to be gentle. I have a few things up in SYW although I think my writing has improved greatly since then. I also have a poem in SYW poetry crit. I just entered the writing for kids spring contest so I can't post that piece until the contest is over. I am happy to return the favor if you need a beta. Thanks!