My novel could be described as a time-travel romance with a twist. Here's the blurb:
When Josie slips seven hundred years backwards in time, she believes it's God's will. Yet the longer she's in the twenty-first century, the more compromises she has to make, until she no longer recognizes the woman she's become. Triggering her metamorphosis is Aiden, a man whose flirtatious, cavalier ways teach her that there's more to life than her strict religious upbringing. As she falls for him, she must reconcile her past with her future—and navigate a world filled with aliens, prophetic dreams, time travel, and love.
This is my second novel and I've just finished (what I hope will be) the final round of revisions. An earlier draft was beta-read last year, but I've made significant changes since then and would like another set of eyes to look it over before I start querying. Basically, I'm looking for two or three beta-readers with experience, someone who can tell me if the plot works, if the characters are compelling--and if not, why.
I don't mind swapping, provided I like your genre and you don't have graphic violence/excessive profanity. Fair warning, though--I'm known for being a ruthless beta-reader. Not rude or harsh, just extremely thorough.
When Josie slips seven hundred years backwards in time, she believes it's God's will. Yet the longer she's in the twenty-first century, the more compromises she has to make, until she no longer recognizes the woman she's become. Triggering her metamorphosis is Aiden, a man whose flirtatious, cavalier ways teach her that there's more to life than her strict religious upbringing. As she falls for him, she must reconcile her past with her future—and navigate a world filled with aliens, prophetic dreams, time travel, and love.
This is my second novel and I've just finished (what I hope will be) the final round of revisions. An earlier draft was beta-read last year, but I've made significant changes since then and would like another set of eyes to look it over before I start querying. Basically, I'm looking for two or three beta-readers with experience, someone who can tell me if the plot works, if the characters are compelling--and if not, why.
I don't mind swapping, provided I like your genre and you don't have graphic violence/excessive profanity. Fair warning, though--I'm known for being a ruthless beta-reader. Not rude or harsh, just extremely thorough.
