This is one of those, "soliciting feedback to see if I'm doing something offensive" posts.
I'm very interested in / concerned with the idea of language with regard to racism and privilege. In my current WIP (which is contemporary SFF), I have an African-American character who speaks with some light AAVE influences (the use of "ain't" and so on, NO phonetic spellings). Of course, I have no hope of not making mistakes with this, but I have someone very qualified I'm hiring to copy edit his dialogue for me. That is, if I keep it the way it is. I wanted to ask for some wider feedback/range of opinions on what you think of giving an African-American character AAVE speech patterns.
The character in question is portrayed as intelligent, compassionate, and badass. He's the secondary lead, and is the MC's voice of conscience as well as backing her up with a gun (if it matters the MC is also a POC, though not African-American). Especially as the series goes on, I'm confident I've portrayed him as a well-realized, three-dimensional character. There are also quite a few other characters of color in the series, including other African-American characters, and they mostly speak Standard English.* But he's the most prominent African-American character and is the only super prominent African-American character in the first book.
Here's why I wanted to do it. Feel free to tell me if you think any of these reasons are FAIL / offensive:
1) It seems to me that assuming all of my African-American characters would choose to speak entirely Standard English* is itself a form of erasure, since many African-American people I know in RL do speak with some level of vernacular.
2) From my reading about language marginalization, it strikes me as a good thing in re: racism/privilege to portray a clearly intelligent (and well-educated, we later learn) man as using some amount of AAVE.
3) I try to ask the question "how does this person's race/background/ethnicity affect him/her?" for ALL my characters, and see what the answer would be, and as I developed this character this choice seemed to make sense. The short version of the relevant parts of his background is: grew up in a poor and violent environment without many options (and grew up speaking AAVE), had a lot of bitterness about his upbringing and strove to erase all the AAVE influences from his speech as part of erasing where he came from, later started to let some of those influences back in as both a way of coming to some peace with his background and reclaiming it, and also so some of the people he was working with would feel more comfortable with him / relate to him better (particularly at-risk youth). Is still capable of code-switching to strong AAVE or Standard English* (and he speaks Spanish and Mandarin Chinese fluently, too). None of this background is given to the reader in the first book, though.
So -- does it concern you that I'm trying to write speech with AAVE influences? Does it concern you that I'm only going with "light" AAVE influences? Does his background strike you as a landmine of cliche / offensiveness? (If it makes a difference, there are a great diversity of both major and minor Black characters in the series, whose professions so far include doctor, math professor, roboticist, police officer, former circus performer, priest, engineer, security guard, comedian, Princeton student, forensic scientist, hairdresser, etc. . . . and he's also not alone in having had a troubled childhood; *all* of my MCs did, in varying ways.)
Thank you in advance for any thoughts! I really have done a lot of reading on this but haven't found much "boots on the ground" thought from media consumers who aren't academics. Totally happy if people want to discuss the general idea of racism through language in this thread, too.
* "Standard English" is the term I always see used in the reading I've done -- if this is considered to marginalize AAVE, please let me know which term I should use instead.
I'm very interested in / concerned with the idea of language with regard to racism and privilege. In my current WIP (which is contemporary SFF), I have an African-American character who speaks with some light AAVE influences (the use of "ain't" and so on, NO phonetic spellings). Of course, I have no hope of not making mistakes with this, but I have someone very qualified I'm hiring to copy edit his dialogue for me. That is, if I keep it the way it is. I wanted to ask for some wider feedback/range of opinions on what you think of giving an African-American character AAVE speech patterns.
The character in question is portrayed as intelligent, compassionate, and badass. He's the secondary lead, and is the MC's voice of conscience as well as backing her up with a gun (if it matters the MC is also a POC, though not African-American). Especially as the series goes on, I'm confident I've portrayed him as a well-realized, three-dimensional character. There are also quite a few other characters of color in the series, including other African-American characters, and they mostly speak Standard English.* But he's the most prominent African-American character and is the only super prominent African-American character in the first book.
Here's why I wanted to do it. Feel free to tell me if you think any of these reasons are FAIL / offensive:
1) It seems to me that assuming all of my African-American characters would choose to speak entirely Standard English* is itself a form of erasure, since many African-American people I know in RL do speak with some level of vernacular.
2) From my reading about language marginalization, it strikes me as a good thing in re: racism/privilege to portray a clearly intelligent (and well-educated, we later learn) man as using some amount of AAVE.
3) I try to ask the question "how does this person's race/background/ethnicity affect him/her?" for ALL my characters, and see what the answer would be, and as I developed this character this choice seemed to make sense. The short version of the relevant parts of his background is: grew up in a poor and violent environment without many options (and grew up speaking AAVE), had a lot of bitterness about his upbringing and strove to erase all the AAVE influences from his speech as part of erasing where he came from, later started to let some of those influences back in as both a way of coming to some peace with his background and reclaiming it, and also so some of the people he was working with would feel more comfortable with him / relate to him better (particularly at-risk youth). Is still capable of code-switching to strong AAVE or Standard English* (and he speaks Spanish and Mandarin Chinese fluently, too). None of this background is given to the reader in the first book, though.
So -- does it concern you that I'm trying to write speech with AAVE influences? Does it concern you that I'm only going with "light" AAVE influences? Does his background strike you as a landmine of cliche / offensiveness? (If it makes a difference, there are a great diversity of both major and minor Black characters in the series, whose professions so far include doctor, math professor, roboticist, police officer, former circus performer, priest, engineer, security guard, comedian, Princeton student, forensic scientist, hairdresser, etc. . . . and he's also not alone in having had a troubled childhood; *all* of my MCs did, in varying ways.)
Thank you in advance for any thoughts! I really have done a lot of reading on this but haven't found much "boots on the ground" thought from media consumers who aren't academics. Totally happy if people want to discuss the general idea of racism through language in this thread, too.
* "Standard English" is the term I always see used in the reading I've done -- if this is considered to marginalize AAVE, please let me know which term I should use instead.