Hey! I'm looking for someone who will be willing to offer constructive criticism on my writing. I love to edit, so I'd definitely be happy to take a look at your work, too. 
My current manuscript, entitled BLACK AND BLUE, is primarily about a young woman and her search for her estranged father. It is told in third person limited, alternating between the POVs of the seventeen-year-old protagonist and her forty-four-year-old godfather.
I'd like to begin submitting my work to agents later this year, so it would be great if someone would be willing to take a look at the sections of the novel which I feel need a lot of revision.
Thank you!
My current manuscript, entitled BLACK AND BLUE, is primarily about a young woman and her search for her estranged father. It is told in third person limited, alternating between the POVs of the seventeen-year-old protagonist and her forty-four-year-old godfather.
I'd like to begin submitting my work to agents later this year, so it would be great if someone would be willing to take a look at the sections of the novel which I feel need a lot of revision.
Thank you!