View Full Version : Need Some Help

02-05-2006, 01:16 AM
I am about half way through writing my second erotica titled Dream Lover that I'm planning to submit to Harlequin's new SPICE line. Is there anyone here who would be interested in critiquing what I have so far and give me feedback on what I can do to strengthen it to make it the best it can be? If so, email me at tarra@tarrayoung.com and I can email it to you.

02-06-2006, 07:06 AM
I'm a bit tied up but if you don't get many replies let me know and i can post a notice for you at ERWF.

02-10-2006, 01:22 AM
I'm afraid it's outside my area of expertise--not my sub-genre--but if a once-over for grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. would be helpful, holler.

Maryn, who knows that stuff