I have a few questions for any agents and/or editors who might happen by:
How do you feel about italicized inner dialogue (IID) in a submitted manuscript? I recently had a retired professional editor and writing consultant look at my manuscript, and she said not to italicize this. I mentioned that I did this because I not only find it easier to read, but that it gives a clearer understanding of what's what. Well, the retired consultant went off on me, saying (I'm paraphrasing here) that it's NOT a book, it's a manuscript, that I'm not the one printing it, that lazy, poor writers do this, also adding that if I wasn't going to take her advice, I could go elsewhere. Ouch. Yes, it's probably more professional to not do it, but if it's now perfectly acceptable, and if it suits my writing style, then is there a reason not do it?
She also criticized that my internal thoughts are in first person present tense, but the narration is in third. This one I don't get at all, as I've seen this done in countless books, with much of the inner dialogue in present tense, regardless of the POV or tense of the narration. I'm now afraid to ask her for clarification, because she's quite prickly.
So...have times changed from when this consultant was in business, with IID now accepted in formatting? Is fiction writing less formal in general than it was ten or twenty years ago? In other words, is a person's 'voice' and a looser writing style now taken into consideration more than it was a decade or two ago? Thank you for any assistance you can provide.
How do you feel about italicized inner dialogue (IID) in a submitted manuscript? I recently had a retired professional editor and writing consultant look at my manuscript, and she said not to italicize this. I mentioned that I did this because I not only find it easier to read, but that it gives a clearer understanding of what's what. Well, the retired consultant went off on me, saying (I'm paraphrasing here) that it's NOT a book, it's a manuscript, that I'm not the one printing it, that lazy, poor writers do this, also adding that if I wasn't going to take her advice, I could go elsewhere. Ouch. Yes, it's probably more professional to not do it, but if it's now perfectly acceptable, and if it suits my writing style, then is there a reason not do it?
She also criticized that my internal thoughts are in first person present tense, but the narration is in third. This one I don't get at all, as I've seen this done in countless books, with much of the inner dialogue in present tense, regardless of the POV or tense of the narration. I'm now afraid to ask her for clarification, because she's quite prickly.
So...have times changed from when this consultant was in business, with IID now accepted in formatting? Is fiction writing less formal in general than it was ten or twenty years ago? In other words, is a person's 'voice' and a looser writing style now taken into consideration more than it was a decade or two ago? Thank you for any assistance you can provide.