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Need Beta for Script! (Not line-by-line, just your general impression)

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AgentSparkle

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Hey!

So I'm creating a webseries, entitled "Jam Yesterday". It's an urban sci-fi about a court typist who pesters an ex-Priest into assisting him in solving the unnatural goings-on in their town.

The first season will be between 6-8 episodes, I have 3 completed and am working on the 4th. But I work fast, so the 4th should be done at least within the week. Each episode is approx 15 pages long, not counting the title page.

I have PDFs I can email you!

What I need is somebody to read the episodes and help me make sure all the characters are in-character, the story has a good flow of events, sufficiently entertaining, and the plot is not too predictable. And if my cliffhangers are cliffhanger-y enough. And if you get attached to any of the characters; if you care about them. And if you ship* any of them!


*ship: basically means that you want these two characters to be in a romantic relationship. Like, a lot of people would ship Mulder with Scully.
 
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bananamelissa

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Did you find someone to help you with this? I am working on some film shorts and I'd love to have a partner I can swap stuff with.
 
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