I'm pretty new to querying, doing it in small batches. I currently have two fulls out, one for a month and one for 2 weeks. In the interim of the one out longer, I received some unexpected feedback from a pitch contest where winners were paired with agented authors as mentors. I was chosen as an alternate, and my mentor generously gave me feedback anyway, which I didn't expect. She indicated some scenes needed trimming, and I've since cut about 2000 words from the MS and mildly changed a couple other things which I thought could be improved on that latest revision pass.
Of course I think I already know the answer to my question, but I will ask it anyway. Should I refrain from asking the first agent if she hasn't read the MS yet, would she want the new version? She was an editor for years with a big publisher prior to agenting, so that's why I'm particularly irritated at myself for possibly blowing this. The second agent has a mostly trimmed version that I'm okay with.
Thanks,
c.e.
Of course I think I already know the answer to my question, but I will ask it anyway. Should I refrain from asking the first agent if she hasn't read the MS yet, would she want the new version? She was an editor for years with a big publisher prior to agenting, so that's why I'm particularly irritated at myself for possibly blowing this. The second agent has a mostly trimmed version that I'm okay with.
Thanks,
c.e.