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W.C. 61,000 words. Known issues are sentence structure, punctuation, and some spelling. This is what I am told is wrong.

Would be willing to swap if you are interested in a reader’s opinion.

A brief synopsis including the ending to see if it is a fit W.C. 288


Shadows over Two Ports


Crescent Moonblade who is human and his companions answer a call from the governor of Two Ports for help. The town is being overrun by orcs and other creatures that are acting peculiar. It is up to them to find out why and rid the town of the creatures.

Syntax Moondew is a half elven thief on the run from a hostile takeover of her guild. She meets Crescent and begins to travel with him. Nesiac Ironjaw is a world famous dwarven pit fighter who finds his career cut short due to someone’s greed.

Clements the head of the Mage’s Guild inadvertently summons Marsus who is an insane arch mage. Marsus joins forces with Clements but has his own agenda. He is also the father of Cynthia Shadowspawn, a half demon, and one of Crescent’s companions. She must decide if her demon blood or her human blood will rule her.

While Jade Brightstone an elven monk is tasked by her goddess to teach Cynthia that blood does not define who one is. Even though she is an accomplished healer she struggles with her desire to learn mage craft.

The companions are forced to separate so they can seek aide from different places. Nesiac meets Parcin a young gypsy, who has always wanted to be as brave as him.

Their calls are answered and all the armies converge on Two Ports. An epic battle is fought and the companions follow Marsus to his old tower. Eventually Marsus’s soul is trapped in a black pearl.

They return to Two Ports and partake in a celebratory feast.

Jade is called in front of the priest where Hecate her goddess intervenes in her banishment from the priest hood.
 
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