hello every one i'm posting this cause i just started my first story called sandman its a sci-fi and i have 4 chapters written so far. All i'm really looking for is someone who is good at grammar and not afraid to tell me when i'm dong something wrong or need to make changes, i'm not afraid of harsh criticism. and i'm completely open to you making changes to the story if you think it'll fit better, all i ask is that you run it by me first. so if your interested let me know and ill send you a link to the story so you can look it over