getfisk, on your publicly-viewable website you've reprinted the first page of a Grisham book. Unless you have permission in writing from Grisham, this is copyright violation. It doesn't fall under 'fair use' since the webpage isn't for the purpose of teaching or literary commentary; it's solely for your own benefit.
AW members aren't here to boost your ego. If you are seeking a beta-reader, please read the FAQs and stickies and post appropriately.