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Hi all
My question relates to registering emotions by mentioning a change in complexion e.g.
He was white-faced;
Two little spots of pink appeared on her cheeks and she sucked in her mouth;
She blushed;
It was quite amusing to watch him turn purple;
I have a character who is dark-skinned (mid brown) though of mixed race. She is liable to go through plenty of emotions. I never realised before how much I depend on descriptions such as the above to register changing feelings, but that is something I took for granted, being white and writing about white people. Is it customary among writers who are PoC or who habitually work with PoC characters to use descriptions similar to these? Just wondering because there's only so often her "eyes can flash" or her face look "haggard"
Anyone else have this issue or is it just me. Anyway, thanks in advance for any feedback available.
My question relates to registering emotions by mentioning a change in complexion e.g.
He was white-faced;
Two little spots of pink appeared on her cheeks and she sucked in her mouth;
She blushed;
It was quite amusing to watch him turn purple;
I have a character who is dark-skinned (mid brown) though of mixed race. She is liable to go through plenty of emotions. I never realised before how much I depend on descriptions such as the above to register changing feelings, but that is something I took for granted, being white and writing about white people. Is it customary among writers who are PoC or who habitually work with PoC characters to use descriptions similar to these? Just wondering because there's only so often her "eyes can flash" or her face look "haggard"
Anyone else have this issue or is it just me. Anyway, thanks in advance for any feedback available.