Patrick, I'd suggest you add this info to your request:
- Genre.
- Category (childrens, MG, YA, NA, adult).
- Word count.
- What kind of feedback you're looking for.
- If possible, a link to where you've posted the query or first chapter in Share Your Work. If not, a brief blurb or summary of the book.
- Whether or not you're willing to trade beta-reads with people, and, if you are, what genre(s) you're willing to critique.
- Whether the ms is a polished, final version, a rough first draft, or an incomplete WIP.
- Preferred time frame for turn-around.