Hi all,
I guess I'm hopelessly dated here. In my recent WIP I have a line in a scene that goes:
Ron was just waving in the first police car, who was ripping through the park like an episode from Dukes of Hazard.
My wife (my harshest and most important beta reader) commented on the side "Who lately has seen Dukes of Hazard?"
I guess she has a point. Can anyone give me a better (more current) example of crazy off road driving TV? Of course it would help if police cars are involved. My work is a contemporary romance and her point is that some readers might not get the visual.
I'm afraid I can't think of one. I don't watch that much TV I guess.
Thanks in advance,
I guess I'm hopelessly dated here. In my recent WIP I have a line in a scene that goes:
Ron was just waving in the first police car, who was ripping through the park like an episode from Dukes of Hazard.
My wife (my harshest and most important beta reader) commented on the side "Who lately has seen Dukes of Hazard?"
I guess she has a point. Can anyone give me a better (more current) example of crazy off road driving TV? Of course it would help if police cars are involved. My work is a contemporary romance and her point is that some readers might not get the visual.
I'm afraid I can't think of one. I don't watch that much TV I guess.
Thanks in advance,