Help! Quick critique?

Hi, guys,

I'm writing at warp speed to finish 5 stories in time to be published by Halloween, and my poor betas are having trouble keeping up. I've posted story#4 in the SYW erotica section, and would be very grateful if someone could look it over for me. The title is "Night of Truth."

Thanks!

Paige

SilverDragon said:

I am actually looking for someone to critique a story I have already published to see if I can get a second opinion on it. Will you critique a story of mine if I critique yours?

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Hi, Silver,

I sent mine off to my editor this afternoon, so you don't need to critique it. But I'd be happy to look at yours. Is it up in the SYW forum?

Paige

It's with Etopia. They're doing an anthology for Halloween, and I submitted a story for that a few weeks ago. Since some of my beta readers thought the story could be expanded into a series, I pitched that to the editor, and they contracted me for 5 stories. We want to publish them as a one-author mini anthology by Halloween, so I've been scrambling to write all 5, eek! The one that just got critiqued here, "Night's End" was the fifth, and I sent it off yesterday. Whew. My editor has gone through the first two with very few edits. I haven't heard back on the other 3 yet, but I don't foresee any problems. It's a rush, though, so no guarantee it will be ready for the Halloween deadline. I'm keeping my fingers crossed.

Go ahead and send your story to me at [email protected] and I'll have a look.

Paige