View Full Version : Seeking beta reader for adult urban fantasy novel

09-03-2012, 05:42 AM
This stands at just under 123,000 words and although some of the characters happen to be vampires, 'Twilight' it ain't.

This is the seedy underbelly of current-day London, featuring hostess clubs, bagmen, guns and the Catholic church. It's the world of Get Carter, with fangs.

There is a fair bit of sex and violence (but not much neck biting) and a number of people die.

I'm looking for a general critique of plot and characterisation rather than line edit - unless you see something that really irks.


Martin Clark