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craker
08-28-2012, 08:27 PM
Hey everyone,
I have a short story, it's about 4 pages, that I would love critiqued if anyone has the time. I would be happy to read and critique anyone else's short story that is close to the same length as mine.

The story is about a boy and his dad canoeing through a tupelo hole in Arkansas. They are grieving the loss of the mother/wife. It's a realistic story, so if you like fantasy and sci-fi, you probably wont enjoy it much.

Let me know if you'd be interested

Peanut1645
08-28-2012, 09:03 PM
I take a look at it; however, my strengths are not in grammar. I can offer a general look at your plot, writing flow and characters. If you think that'll be helpful, PM me.

craker
08-28-2012, 10:05 PM
That's totally fine. Just PM'ed you