It has been pointed out to me in a recent crit I received that I confused eyeliner for mascara.
I went to project replace all "eyeliner" for "mascara"...but this is a medieval-esque setting...is that anachronous? Did I even use the word "anachronous" correctly haha?
I did some research and found that egyptians used "kohl" in their eyes. But i don't know if kohl=mascara. I though mascara was a modern invention in cosmetics. I'm afraid if I use "kohl" instead of "eyeliner" my readers might scratch their heads, because when I saw the word kohl, my first thought was the clothing store haha.
And now that I think of it, would the stuff that Egyptians used run if they cried? I may have to just ditch that description all together because maybe only modern makeup smudges via tears...
I went to project replace all "eyeliner" for "mascara"...but this is a medieval-esque setting...is that anachronous? Did I even use the word "anachronous" correctly haha?
I did some research and found that egyptians used "kohl" in their eyes. But i don't know if kohl=mascara. I though mascara was a modern invention in cosmetics. I'm afraid if I use "kohl" instead of "eyeliner" my readers might scratch their heads, because when I saw the word kohl, my first thought was the clothing store haha.
And now that I think of it, would the stuff that Egyptians used run if they cried? I may have to just ditch that description all together because maybe only modern makeup smudges via tears...