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Hey there,
I am working on a story about a modern Renfield. The story is about this modern Renfield and his relationship to one of his victims. As such there are vampires in my story, but they are not the focus of the story. They’re a motivator, not the focus.
Here are a couple of statements that I would like to test out on you that are experts in such things; to see whether the statements fall flat and would make the knowing reader laugh and throw the book into the wastebin.
#1 - Allixin, is a microbial inhibitor, present in high concentration in garlic, and it is Allixin that makes vampires abhore garlic. In particular its effect on fungal cells make allixin dangerous to vampires.
#2 - The body chemistry of vampires are slighty photosynthetic, and this is why vampires are sensitive to sunlight. The fungal parasitic infection turns low-light into energy that sustains the vampire. The cellular structure of the parasitic infection (see below) that make vampires is evolved for low-light conditions, dark underground caves, etc, and exposure to direct sunlight can overload cells.
#3 - Vampires suffer from a parasitic infection that is spread throughout the human body. Much like in the case of the “zombie ants”, a particular fungus can invade a human body and alter the body chemistry and induce a high-iron craving that is best satisfied by ingesting the blood of mammals.
As you see I'm trying for a more scientific rational for the existence of vampires, rather than a metaphysical one. If these statements I made make you laugh out loud because of their innate silliness, could you please say why so that I may think of alternatives?
Thanks.
I am working on a story about a modern Renfield. The story is about this modern Renfield and his relationship to one of his victims. As such there are vampires in my story, but they are not the focus of the story. They’re a motivator, not the focus.
Here are a couple of statements that I would like to test out on you that are experts in such things; to see whether the statements fall flat and would make the knowing reader laugh and throw the book into the wastebin.
#1 - Allixin, is a microbial inhibitor, present in high concentration in garlic, and it is Allixin that makes vampires abhore garlic. In particular its effect on fungal cells make allixin dangerous to vampires.
#2 - The body chemistry of vampires are slighty photosynthetic, and this is why vampires are sensitive to sunlight. The fungal parasitic infection turns low-light into energy that sustains the vampire. The cellular structure of the parasitic infection (see below) that make vampires is evolved for low-light conditions, dark underground caves, etc, and exposure to direct sunlight can overload cells.
#3 - Vampires suffer from a parasitic infection that is spread throughout the human body. Much like in the case of the “zombie ants”, a particular fungus can invade a human body and alter the body chemistry and induce a high-iron craving that is best satisfied by ingesting the blood of mammals.
As you see I'm trying for a more scientific rational for the existence of vampires, rather than a metaphysical one. If these statements I made make you laugh out loud because of their innate silliness, could you please say why so that I may think of alternatives?
Thanks.
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