Hello! I am seeking Beta Readers for my novel, A Midwinter Night's Revolution.
Genre: semi-historical fantasy romance with a political revolution, set in the late 1700s. Primarily fantasy.
Category: Basically adult, possibly YA; MC is 17.
Word count: 75k
What kind of feedback you're looking for: Please be direct and honest about any problems or issues you find. Have no fear for my feelings--I just want to make this the best book I can.
My beginning:
Every year on midwinter's eve, the King of Naveen hosted a grand masquerade, driving away the gloom with blazing fires, warm candles, fanciful costumes, sparkling wine, elaborate dances, and fine friends.
Lyta was too young to attend.
You can read the rest of ch. 1 and the beginning of ch. 2 over here.
I'll be perfectly happy to swap.
Genre: semi-historical fantasy romance with a political revolution, set in the late 1700s. Primarily fantasy.
Category: Basically adult, possibly YA; MC is 17.
Word count: 75k
What kind of feedback you're looking for: Please be direct and honest about any problems or issues you find. Have no fear for my feelings--I just want to make this the best book I can.
My beginning:
Every year on midwinter's eve, the King of Naveen hosted a grand masquerade, driving away the gloom with blazing fires, warm candles, fanciful costumes, sparkling wine, elaborate dances, and fine friends.
Lyta was too young to attend.
You can read the rest of ch. 1 and the beginning of ch. 2 over here.
I'll be perfectly happy to swap.