View Full Version : Beta Needed for Werewolf Novel

08-04-2012, 10:18 PM
There exists a special organisation who believe the world needs to change. That God is dead, and with their help, a new Lord will take his place. This group is still in its infancy, with only a few under a master, but then someone necessary to the Lord's plan is found - a werewolf. This young werewolf now must choose between aiding this cult in spreading their word, or joining a man who could possibly cure her lycanthrophy. Either way, the Master will be watching her. Based on my earlier story 'The Werewolf Asylum (http://www.lulu.com/shop/gareth-barsby/the-werewolf-asylum/paperback/product-14616085.html)', which is not essential to read before reading this story.

I would like a beta to read what I have and offer suggestions and advice on how to improve it.

08-04-2012, 10:34 PM
Hi Jabburwock
While it sounds intriguing, it's considered a big faux pas to request this kind of thing the day you join the forum. You'll find that it's polite to have contributed to others a bit first to show you're part of the team, not just a drive by edit. This is why there's a 50 post minimum before you can submit something to the Share Your Work (SYW) thread.

Go forth and comment on other's posts. Read some stuff in the SYW and offer some edit advice before you jump in and audaciously ask someone to beta an entire novel for you.
Once you have participated I'd be glad to consider giving sections of your work a once over.