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KJRhyne
08-02-2012, 02:20 AM
I am currently finishing up the last few chapters of a fantasy fiction novel. I am looking for someone who can assist in editing the flow, finding any plot holes (hopefully I have filled all of them, but those damn rabbits keep digging) and working with me to maintain tense. My story is given in first person present; however, I have the tendency to move to first person past when it pleases me and I find it annoying. I have been wasting time moving back and forth to chapters that are completed and done when I should be finishing the book. The book has religious, mythological, medieval and neolithic themes, but is essentially a modern adventure.

I have twelve chapters ready for the block but am nervous and really would just like some eyes on what I have done and a non-bias opinion on if I should just stick to my day job.

luxisufeili
08-02-2012, 03:17 AM
Just a quick heads up, instead of saying it's a "fantasy fiction novel," just say it's "fantasy." Otherwise it's redundant. ;)

Are you willing to swap?

AshRose
09-14-2012, 08:31 AM
Sounds interesting to me! Shoot me a PM if you're still looking for beta readers. We can swap a few pages/chapters and see where it goes.