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pgermanos
07-31-2012, 05:06 PM
So far I have one beta reader, but I think I need one or two or three more--I currently have one for general plot etc, but I am also looking for one who likes to critique grammar etc

Here (http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=250448) is where I am currently working on the query, and soon I will be posting a synopsis

Anyways, to get a brief sense of my writing, here is the first three sentences of the first chapter:


It is the year 2324, and yet, we still havenít invented a tool that can help a person escape nightmares. Weíve had a few people collaborate on attempting to create some type of mechanism that could at least stabilize our bodies in order to prevent bad dreams, but that just didnít work. I think it is impossible to invent such a device, which is really quite unfortunate for me.

If you want I will swap MS and give you feedback too--if you just want to critique me and give me feedback, that's fine! :)

Violeta
07-31-2012, 05:58 PM
Couldn't resist. :tongue PM'ed you.

pgermanos
07-31-2012, 06:56 PM
:)

I got two so far--that means if one more person is interested, let me know!

pgermanos
08-01-2012, 05:34 AM
I actually need 1 or 2 more beta readers, so please let me know--I'm willing to swap!

Khazarkhum
08-01-2012, 01:42 PM
I'm game.

My background is Lit Crit, with a nice, heaping helping of Art History. I can do a grammar check, or, if you prefer, line edit.