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YA Urban Fantasy Swap - First three chapters

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Silent Rob

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Hello everybody,

I'm really keen to get some considered opinions on the first three chapters of a YA urban fantasy, which is loosely based on the Jack Frost fable.

I'm at the stage where I'm considering sending it out to agents, but I'd like to get a good feel for how the opening sections read, i.e. are they grabbing enough?

I'm a Brit, so it's written with Brit spellings and set in the UK, which I hope wouldn't be too off-putting for people! :)

I'd be very happy to return the favour, of course, whether you have something ready now or want to have a beta standing by for when you do.

Hope to hear from you!

Rob
 

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Hey silent rob, congrats on finishing your manuscript, I'd love to read it and give you some solid critique. PM with the details and we can swap email addresses so you can send it to me.
 
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