I'm struggling with POV for my WIP. I usually write in third person limited, but this one seems much easier to write in first person past. OK, fine. First person past it is. Except that I keep finding myself writing little bits in the present, generally reflections on things that happened.
Example:
Here’s the thing about the end of the world: it’s mind-numbingly boring.
But does this work in a story written in first person past POV? All of the action takes place in past tense, it's just these little comments that keep sliding in in present tense. Most of the books that I read that have these side comments tend to be written in present tense, with only flashbacks written in past tense.
I hope that some of you can understand the jumbled mess of a question that I just asked. See? I can't even wrap my brain around how to ask about tenses, let alone write them! Thanks for any thoughts!
Example:
Here’s the thing about the end of the world: it’s mind-numbingly boring.
But does this work in a story written in first person past POV? All of the action takes place in past tense, it's just these little comments that keep sliding in in present tense. Most of the books that I read that have these side comments tend to be written in present tense, with only flashbacks written in past tense.
I hope that some of you can understand the jumbled mess of a question that I just asked. See? I can't even wrap my brain around how to ask about tenses, let alone write them! Thanks for any thoughts!
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