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Updates: (1) Latest blurb attempt is post #26. (2) if anyone has title suggestions I'm certainly happy to hear them. A tremendous thank you to everyone who has provided feedback and suggestions.
Hey guys!
I'm roughly 70% done my revisions for Moon Dance, but one thing I tend to do when I'm stuck is work on all the other aspects of my book that go outside the actual writing. Today I'd like to link you to an image that I am thinking of using for the front cover. I'd also like to share the blurb I'm thinking of putting on the back. Your feedback would be deeply appreciated on both.
The Cover Image:
Here is the image.
What I Like:
-- The female dancer's hair
-- The female dancer's dress
-- The way both dancers are positioned
-- The overall 'feel' of the image
What Concerns Me:
-- How old do these people look?
-- Do the blur effects take away from the image?
-- Even if it "looks nice" is it appropriate for YA fantasy / romance?
My family and friends think it looks great, but they are my family and friends. I could show them the geico gecko on a white background with my name and title in Times New Roman and they'd go "That's great!". *laughs*
I like the image. But it is completely possible that I am seeing things about it which are not going to be there for a reader scrolling down a page on Amazon. I have done my homework enough to know that "I like it." as the author does not mean it will necessarily translate into a good cover. (Much as I might wish otherwise.)
If I want to purchase this image it's going to cost me $30 - $40 to do that. I figured I was smarter to show it here first, rather then buy it and have people go, "But, Kat! That looks TERRIBLE!" I do have ideas on what I want to use for the fonts for my name, the title and my tagline. I have downloaded a sample and have messed with that, but since I have not purchased the image it seemed to me that it would be dishonorable to post that here.
(On a side note: If I do decide to buy this which size am I going to want?)
I was going to work with a local graphic designer but when I found out that the $25 / hour fee was going to require 15 - 20 hours ($375 - $500) to design my cover I had to tell them that was beyond my budget. I'm sure they are really talented and could have produced something beautiful, but since this is my first book and I do not have a lot of money it did not seem feasible.
I'm sure I could save myself a migraine by getting a PayPal account and hiring someone, but my family had some real trouble with that when it released (I realize that was years ago) and everyone *here* is telling me I'm "talented enough to do it myself". (Which is probably family-ese for "you can't guarantee your book's going to sell so why waste the money?" but we won't go there. )
Should I bite the bullet and set that up? Any suggestions on a way to test it and make sure it works right so that I don't set something up and have trouble getting it paid for? (I know I can be a bit paranoid, but I would find that upsetting.)
My take is that I have an interesting story and that it deserves a nice cover. I don't necessarily think I need to spend $500 on that (as I said, that is beyond what I can reasonably afford) but I want to provide it with something that will do justice to what I've been working on for over a year and which will draw in readers. (Stories only truly live when someone is reading them. I know it sounds cheesy, but that's how I feel and I am a little sentimental.)
At any rate, I'm done rambling. Thoughts? Comments? Suggestions?
My Blurb:
He Saved Her Life...
Two years ago Sarena Lengton died in a fire. When her soul journeyed to the Underworld she met Zakariah, the Lord of Judgement. Refusing to let her die, he gave Sara fruit from the Tree of Life. He also tasked her with a mission: to unite him with the other half of his soul, currently living on Earth.
She'll Save His Soul...
When a student is murdered at Sterling High Sara thinks the Kindred, ageless beings who came to Earth during the Millenium, are somehow responsible. Desperate to protect her friends she turns to the one person who might be able to help: Prince Kesyl "Kess" Veradayne. He too saved her life the night her world went up in flames -- then discarded her the moment she rejoined the living.
The Truth Could Change Everything...
Hunted by a deadly foe, Sara and Kess must forget their past if they want to have a future. But will that be enough to stop a ruthless goddess who wants them both dead?
***
I am more confident in this then I am in the image, but I figure I should still let it get some feedback. Did it get your attention? Is it too short or too long? Is it distinct enough or does it seem generic? Yet again, any thoughts, comments or suggestions are welcome.
Thanks so much for taking the time to look at this. Have a great day!
Hey guys!
I'm roughly 70% done my revisions for Moon Dance, but one thing I tend to do when I'm stuck is work on all the other aspects of my book that go outside the actual writing. Today I'd like to link you to an image that I am thinking of using for the front cover. I'd also like to share the blurb I'm thinking of putting on the back. Your feedback would be deeply appreciated on both.
The Cover Image:
Here is the image.
What I Like:
-- The female dancer's hair
-- The female dancer's dress
-- The way both dancers are positioned
-- The overall 'feel' of the image
What Concerns Me:
-- How old do these people look?
-- Do the blur effects take away from the image?
-- Even if it "looks nice" is it appropriate for YA fantasy / romance?
My family and friends think it looks great, but they are my family and friends. I could show them the geico gecko on a white background with my name and title in Times New Roman and they'd go "That's great!". *laughs*
I like the image. But it is completely possible that I am seeing things about it which are not going to be there for a reader scrolling down a page on Amazon. I have done my homework enough to know that "I like it." as the author does not mean it will necessarily translate into a good cover. (Much as I might wish otherwise.)
If I want to purchase this image it's going to cost me $30 - $40 to do that. I figured I was smarter to show it here first, rather then buy it and have people go, "But, Kat! That looks TERRIBLE!" I do have ideas on what I want to use for the fonts for my name, the title and my tagline. I have downloaded a sample and have messed with that, but since I have not purchased the image it seemed to me that it would be dishonorable to post that here.
(On a side note: If I do decide to buy this which size am I going to want?)
I was going to work with a local graphic designer but when I found out that the $25 / hour fee was going to require 15 - 20 hours ($375 - $500) to design my cover I had to tell them that was beyond my budget. I'm sure they are really talented and could have produced something beautiful, but since this is my first book and I do not have a lot of money it did not seem feasible.
I'm sure I could save myself a migraine by getting a PayPal account and hiring someone, but my family had some real trouble with that when it released (I realize that was years ago) and everyone *here* is telling me I'm "talented enough to do it myself". (Which is probably family-ese for "you can't guarantee your book's going to sell so why waste the money?" but we won't go there. )
Should I bite the bullet and set that up? Any suggestions on a way to test it and make sure it works right so that I don't set something up and have trouble getting it paid for? (I know I can be a bit paranoid, but I would find that upsetting.)
My take is that I have an interesting story and that it deserves a nice cover. I don't necessarily think I need to spend $500 on that (as I said, that is beyond what I can reasonably afford) but I want to provide it with something that will do justice to what I've been working on for over a year and which will draw in readers. (Stories only truly live when someone is reading them. I know it sounds cheesy, but that's how I feel and I am a little sentimental.)
At any rate, I'm done rambling. Thoughts? Comments? Suggestions?
My Blurb:
He Saved Her Life...
Two years ago Sarena Lengton died in a fire. When her soul journeyed to the Underworld she met Zakariah, the Lord of Judgement. Refusing to let her die, he gave Sara fruit from the Tree of Life. He also tasked her with a mission: to unite him with the other half of his soul, currently living on Earth.
She'll Save His Soul...
When a student is murdered at Sterling High Sara thinks the Kindred, ageless beings who came to Earth during the Millenium, are somehow responsible. Desperate to protect her friends she turns to the one person who might be able to help: Prince Kesyl "Kess" Veradayne. He too saved her life the night her world went up in flames -- then discarded her the moment she rejoined the living.
The Truth Could Change Everything...
Hunted by a deadly foe, Sara and Kess must forget their past if they want to have a future. But will that be enough to stop a ruthless goddess who wants them both dead?
***
I am more confident in this then I am in the image, but I figure I should still let it get some feedback. Did it get your attention? Is it too short or too long? Is it distinct enough or does it seem generic? Yet again, any thoughts, comments or suggestions are welcome.
Thanks so much for taking the time to look at this. Have a great day!
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