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I'm not sure if this is better here or in the Sandbox, but there's some pretty specific knowledge required, so I'll try here.
I'm in over my head with a Romance I'm writing. The financial wheelings and dealings aren't the core of the story, but I'd like them to be authentic. Essentially, I'm trying to engineer a reconciliation between a father and son, and I think I'd like to do it through introducing a common enemy. But it's a contemporary story and the principal drama is elsewhere, so I don't want a kidnapping or a murder or anything!
Both men are successful in business. The father runs the family company (toy manufacturing, with a factory on some prime Seattle real estate). I've had the son secretly buying up stock for years (with numbered companies, etc. so the father didn't know who was buying - is this possible/legal?). The son still doesn't have more than about 20% of the shares, but he has a fairly compelling case that the father has been managing the company poorly (he was head of the board of directors and CEO). So the son, with support of the other shareholders, takes over the headship of the board and installs his own minion as CEO.
I want the son and father to continue fighting, and then realize that they have to stop in order to save themselves/the company from a hostile outsider. This is where I need help.
My current scenario has the son arranging to move the factory to cheaper land, modernizing as they go, and selling the land to a company in which he holds significant stock. He'll recuse himself from decisions in which he would have a conflict of interest and be otherwise careful, but it's still a bit fishy. Is it REALLY fishy? Like, illegal? Or is he okay as long as he's above board about it all and doesn't vote on the issue?
Assuming that's okay, I want the father to get mad and make an offer on the land himself. I want this to somehow make him financially vulnerable - like he's over-leveraged himself, or something. And then I want the bad guy to swoop in and demand repayment or else... something bad happens to the father. Essentially, I guess, I want Shylock to demand his pound of flesh. Then I can have the son overcome his childish bitterness with his father and swoop in to fight Shylock together. But what mechanisms might the father have used that would result in this kind of vulnerability?
So:
Is my scenario too far fetched, up to the point where the father outbids the son for the land?
and How the hell can I get the father into trouble? Ideally, I'd like it to happen pretty fast, too (forgot to mention that part) - not like he committed to high interest rates and three years later can't make the payments - I need something quick and dramatic, if at all possible.
Thanks for any help with this, and sorry if it's long AND vague - a bad combination, I know.
I'm in over my head with a Romance I'm writing. The financial wheelings and dealings aren't the core of the story, but I'd like them to be authentic. Essentially, I'm trying to engineer a reconciliation between a father and son, and I think I'd like to do it through introducing a common enemy. But it's a contemporary story and the principal drama is elsewhere, so I don't want a kidnapping or a murder or anything!
Both men are successful in business. The father runs the family company (toy manufacturing, with a factory on some prime Seattle real estate). I've had the son secretly buying up stock for years (with numbered companies, etc. so the father didn't know who was buying - is this possible/legal?). The son still doesn't have more than about 20% of the shares, but he has a fairly compelling case that the father has been managing the company poorly (he was head of the board of directors and CEO). So the son, with support of the other shareholders, takes over the headship of the board and installs his own minion as CEO.
I want the son and father to continue fighting, and then realize that they have to stop in order to save themselves/the company from a hostile outsider. This is where I need help.
My current scenario has the son arranging to move the factory to cheaper land, modernizing as they go, and selling the land to a company in which he holds significant stock. He'll recuse himself from decisions in which he would have a conflict of interest and be otherwise careful, but it's still a bit fishy. Is it REALLY fishy? Like, illegal? Or is he okay as long as he's above board about it all and doesn't vote on the issue?
Assuming that's okay, I want the father to get mad and make an offer on the land himself. I want this to somehow make him financially vulnerable - like he's over-leveraged himself, or something. And then I want the bad guy to swoop in and demand repayment or else... something bad happens to the father. Essentially, I guess, I want Shylock to demand his pound of flesh. Then I can have the son overcome his childish bitterness with his father and swoop in to fight Shylock together. But what mechanisms might the father have used that would result in this kind of vulnerability?
So:
Is my scenario too far fetched, up to the point where the father outbids the son for the land?
and How the hell can I get the father into trouble? Ideally, I'd like it to happen pretty fast, too (forgot to mention that part) - not like he committed to high interest rates and three years later can't make the payments - I need something quick and dramatic, if at all possible.
Thanks for any help with this, and sorry if it's long AND vague - a bad combination, I know.