I’m looking for a beta for the first few chapters of my finished YA fantasy novel. I have edited it once or twice, but you can only read something so many times before it all becomes floating gibberish.
To summarize, my novel is about a seventeen-year old immortal girl whose older sisters/guardians are kidnapped on the exact same day the people that are hunting her family find her. That’s basically the first chapter. The rest of the book consists of traveling to other realms, avoiding psychopathic blackmailing demons, flirting with the occasional king, trying to stay sane while being the host to a grumpy dark power and, of course, rescuing aforementioned sisters.
In the ideal world, I would simply send you the first chapter (maybe the prologue, too). I’m mainly looking for someone else to share their thoughts, feelings and concerns with me since my brain is a spaz. The reason I posted this here and not in SYW (aside from the obvious post requirement) is because I would like someone to read the whole 28 chapters, but figured I should just try to get one read before I whip the whole thing at some poor, unsuspecting person.
I’ll do a swap. PM if you’re interested.
[Warning: Occasional violence and swearing]
To summarize, my novel is about a seventeen-year old immortal girl whose older sisters/guardians are kidnapped on the exact same day the people that are hunting her family find her. That’s basically the first chapter. The rest of the book consists of traveling to other realms, avoiding psychopathic blackmailing demons, flirting with the occasional king, trying to stay sane while being the host to a grumpy dark power and, of course, rescuing aforementioned sisters.
In the ideal world, I would simply send you the first chapter (maybe the prologue, too). I’m mainly looking for someone else to share their thoughts, feelings and concerns with me since my brain is a spaz. The reason I posted this here and not in SYW (aside from the obvious post requirement) is because I would like someone to read the whole 28 chapters, but figured I should just try to get one read before I whip the whole thing at some poor, unsuspecting person.
I’ll do a swap. PM if you’re interested.
[Warning: Occasional violence and swearing]