PARTIAL REQUESTED!

/swoons

Thanks. They requested first thirty. I will be feverishly going over those tonight to spot any irregularities, typos, or last minute fixes.

Anyone want to do a quick Alpha of the first 30 of a post-apocalyptic urban fantasy? Send me a PM or rep point with your email. (Rep points are better. I'm a rep point whore. LOL)

I stayed up last night reading the whole thing (whilst making last minute edits), and damn... The end of the book makes me cry. There are some farewells that are hard to take, and if you're emotionally invested in the characters (as I am), they don't come easy.

I only hope that with the rest of the book I manage to invest my readers as completely. If I did that, then the end of the novel will be the key that locks this in their "Damn, that was a good book" memory files.

benbradley said:

I suppose the agent has it now, congratulations!

I was gonna say, I have an eye for typos. And sentence fragments.

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Yeah, I sent it just a few hours ago. I'd be happy to have you look at it though, if you still want to. I never turn down constructive criticism, and love to have people read my work!

Aaaaaaaand... Rejected.

Ah well. Live to fight another day, right?