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[Beta Trade] YA Fantasy Short Story (4,500 words)

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eablevins

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In a world of heroes, villains, and super powers, nine-year-old Leah visits her big brother in Las Vegas. 4,500 words.

[Minor Violence, Minor Language]

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Please be brutal. Will trade for chapters or short stories of comparable length.
 
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I will trade for a extremely short few chapters of a book I am working on and feedback on the plot as a whole. I can do proof-reading and very brutal, UN-sugarcoated feedback.
 
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