View Full Version : [Beta Trade] YA Fantasy Short Story (4,500 words)

06-06-2012, 05:53 PM
In a world of heroes, villains, and super powers, nine-year-old Leah visits her big brother in Las Vegas. 4,500 words.

[Minor Violence, Minor Language]


Please be brutal. Will trade for chapters or short stories of comparable length.

06-19-2012, 09:45 AM
I will trade for a extremely short few chapters of a book I am working on and feedback on the plot as a whole. I can do proof-reading and very brutal, UN-sugarcoated feedback.