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I've been working on outlining a plot. It has a clear main character and villain, who have strong conflict between them (at the beginning of the story they have an interaction where each feels injured by the other and they have violently opposed politics) as well as a third character to fight over (FMC's love interest is villain's son, villain opposes any contact between the two). I knew I wanted to end the story with the villain finally being forced to leave the MC alone and accept his son being in a romance with the MC (and also as a subplot, the villain has refused to start any relationships of his own for years, I want him to move on, open up, and start a relationship with a secondary character who everyone knows has a crush on him).
So the part that was missing until recently was how all this conflict would come to a head and get resolved. Now I thought of an idea, it would work EXCEPT... the idea I thought of has the climax be a fight between the villain and his child (after the MC makes a final persuasive argument to the son, the climax all revolves on his decision whether to be with her and his convincing of his father to accept that. The MC would not be directly interacting with the villain. I was just reading a how-to book saying that this makes for a weak ending. And it does feel kind of weak. Soo, suggestions? Questions? Opinions?
So the part that was missing until recently was how all this conflict would come to a head and get resolved. Now I thought of an idea, it would work EXCEPT... the idea I thought of has the climax be a fight between the villain and his child (after the MC makes a final persuasive argument to the son, the climax all revolves on his decision whether to be with her and his convincing of his father to accept that. The MC would not be directly interacting with the villain. I was just reading a how-to book saying that this makes for a weak ending. And it does feel kind of weak. Soo, suggestions? Questions? Opinions?