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Betas needed - dark fantasy

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ravenlea

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Looking for a few good betas for a dark fantasy novel around 97K. blurb below:

Sisters and witches, Avery and Capria, have always looked out for each other. That doesn't change even after Avery is turned into a vampire and Capria finds herself in the company of vampire haters. However, there are those who would twist that loyalty. Kieran, Avery's maker and lover, and Jersey, Capria's mentor and guardian, work to break the sisters' bond.

As part of a bargain made years ago to keep the village safe, Avery is turned over to vampires. Capria is desperate to find a way to make Avery mortal again. The realm’s most powerful witches take Capria under their wings, but refuse to see Avery as anything but a monster. They consider Avery the most dangerous vampire in the realm because of her natural ability to wield witch magic.

Capria’s mentors convince her Avery must die, but Avery is obsessed with reuniting with Capria, no matter what the cost. Even if it means destroying each other and the realm itself.


I do reciprocate, so if you have something you want looked over, send it my way.

thanks!
 
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(Could you change the font to AW's default rather than letting your word processor's teensy font override it? I can only read this if I enlarge my display. That means others probably will see it's tough reading and move their attentions to another post, costing you potential betas.)
 

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I like the premise. Could I see the first chapter? I'd like to get an
idea of your writing style and the story itself. Meaning; if it hooks me as much as the premise :tongue.
 

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I'm with Violeta. :)

Please let us know if that's okay with you.
 
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